~WRITE THE OTHER CHAPTER 15! CONTEST!~

Make the best chapter 15! The winner will get 10,000 Gaia Gold and an august mc envelope. Anyone who wishes to donate a prize is welcome to. Just send a trade to Penguin Invasion!
edit: Okay, since the REAL chapter 15 is up -yay!- this is now the OTHER chapter 15 contest.

-The contest will end august 26th
-Voting will begin august 28th
-The winner will be announced on august 31st.

Post your chapter in here when you're done. We want as many people as possible to enter!
Look for a write the best FTS ending contest in the near future!

BEGIN!

Also, thanks to i TUMORZ for the MC envelope!



Heres the link to the write chapter 15 discusion/questions/spam thread: http://dally.omgforum.net/free-chat-f4/chapter-15-contest-chatter-spam-thread-t247.htm#4434

o i c wut u did thar.

I started writing, but I can't promise it will come near Dally's genius.

Is it fine if it's split into two parts? Like some epic finale thingy?
Because I think that's gonna have to happen with my idea...

Wheelcheese wrote:

Is it fine if it's split into two parts? Like some epic finale thingy?
Because I think that's gonna have to happen with my idea...

Sure, sure. You can do whatever you want with it =)

We should keep this thread for contest submissions and have one thread for where we can chat about the contest and such ^^ that way we won't have to search for submissions through all the chatter.

WAIT.

Can I make Chapter 15 the 'end'?

Great Depression wrote:

WAIT.

Can I make Chapter 15 the 'end'?

I guess, if you want it to end at chapter 15.
Then you could also submit it to the 'create the best FTS ending' contest.

:'D That's awesome!

Thats just me, bby.

:'D Really?

Of coarse!

Dally and Hiei were in the kitchen geting in postition for breakfast, they were alone because Sasuke and Link hed gone to fishing and now they were enjoying not having a carebear in the world (they had decided lets just take a berak for a while it will be ok and we will replenish our Hps)
Dally was sitting in front of a bowel of milk and she waiting hiei getting the serials he was opening the cuppboeards slowly as if relly relaxsed.
"oh strange ting" he said in a moment "Hiei and Sasuke have gone fishing yet they left the grade F bait here" his nose rotated in suspicions.
"They dont use grade f bait anymoore now they switchd to Master Bait!" she clearificated.
"Ohh" Hiei understanded the situation.
So hiei set down he was now ready for cereals but he didnt plunged is heand in the box for fetching them anymore because dally said its gross so he just rotated the box until theyd fell.
But in the middle off their brekifest somethung happened, a ball exteriorized itself out of below the kitchen table and now rising above their heads slowly as if floating in watery air. it had strands of dark coming out of the top and also eyes in the middle and also a nose and a mouth, hiei thought it reminded of harry potter he thought..
!""HARRYPOTTER!" Dally yellt at full throttle. Hiei was scared not really by the head of harry potter but because the yell realle loud and he swallowed his spoon it even reatched is steve's apple.
"WHAT DO YOU WANT?" Hiei growled, this head had broken his relaxiation.
"Dally, Hie..." The head spoke but they couldnt hear clearly becuz it was having intermissions, it squirmed out of place and looked like a rubrik's painting
"..took... baby... you mustttt.."
"CALM!" dally not pleased atall "what are these intimacies i do not allow you call me babe!!"
"No Dallly" hiei eh said capturing the meaning "he mans our shadow, Baby!"
OH she standed correctly
the heade proseegued "Edwa..rd.. took him... evil... is in Magica..." and wit these finaly words it the head exploded in a ball of ectoplasmick seamen.
There was a sailence because of shock and the Heiei brok:
"Dally what does it means?!?" his unsettlement was clear
"I think Harry potter means Edoard took shadow baby ;_; Edward is now for the evil"
"And "Magica..."??'" his doubts still lingeried
"It's Magicastle. It is like a castle and magical" Dally was a very informational person
Hoeever to get to there was an issue to be dilated it. Theys both looked through sum magic books fervently maybe there is a spell in here to help oz out?
"I FOUND" Dally said winning the race "It is perfect look this spell here it teaches us ow to teleprostate!."
Hiei looked but in vein he could not understand all that messy html... "teach me i dont feel like readings" he said said
"Ok so all you hav to do... is to constrict your thoughts in your glandes" dally said, hiei said yes with his head, she continue "crank your nuckles, and thewn you will be moved to a choice of your selectin"
"Ok seams easy lets go" Hiei wanted back as as possible
So they both fellow thes pell's instructinions and it did work they got moved, they were in a place of darkness and purple.
"BABY SHADOW" they both called for their baby they wanted backs. "IT IS US YOURS PARERENTS"
tHere wasnt now reply at all. They excavated through the nothingness but all they found was nothing they were in a place of nothingns and they now in dispairs.
HOWEVER there was a sound finally now all ofsudden, it was od footsteps coming from somewhere and towards the couple. They were ringing in alarm, what if it is the evil Dublbledore, Mystuqie and now Edwart?
"Mommi Dalli!!<3" said the voice childeshly, it was Shadow (The Baby), oh so cute it run towards dally and hugged her with cute passion, tears stereamed speedily as if gravity was pulling them.
"It is ok my baby" Daly said motherthree, "you are back to union"
"Mommy i made three poos in my pants and now its only one WHAT ITS HAPPENING?" He saud wile massaging her breasts. The child's mouth burped a crying
"It is this place" Hiei said like a good fatherwuld "It doesnt obey by the rules of the orderly. We must netscape its layer at once!"
"ok baby" Dally spoke to shadow baby "you must construct thought in your glandes and think of home, can you do that??"
"Soore mommy i can do tha yes" Shadow the baby said teenagerly
But the events did not goo as planted, because simply Edward appearedd standing in some centimeters afar
"We meet" he said in a voiceover that was not on of kinderness
"FuCK OFF EDWARD YOU" Hiei insultued, he never like Edward and now hee can fully expres it
"Fufufu" Edwar giggeled creepy, he opened is mouth like a BoA and stretcheded his tongue like a lickitung. It was huge even huger than Sting's.
"OH MY GOD" Dally screamo'd because it was wrapping around the extremititis of the baby
"NOO OH NO" Hiei was horrorfiled. it was a slymy and desgusting site.
The tangela pulled stronger and Dalla couldnt hold it unfortunatelly and her embrace broked the loos.
Edward now had the baby shadow Baby and was now piggybacking him.
"He is now in my custody" edward notified and everyone was sad "I will re-encode him into evil and will unchosenone him" and with this and with a click and a knock in a seconds that seemed like minutes Edward disappeared and he had tooken for him the Shadow a Baby!!!! >_<

Very nice, bean!
I particularly liked "The child's mouth burped a crying"

Dally looked rlly byutiful in her rlly tyny tank-tawp and shawts. For brekfist, she wus having baycin and fryed eggs, but she onli pikked at the food, not hungry for anything but her baaabaaay. Her bumblebee boobs were hevy with milk and blood, and Dally felt too helthy without her baaabaaay sucking out the blud and milk from her amazing breasts. Her lovly scarlit eyes looked worriedly at Hiei. "You dunt thing that Harry and Shadow are in truble KTFDing?" Hiei and Sasuke both looked back at her, and they had obviusly bin thingking the same thawt. Smiling bravely back at her, Sasuke and Hiei said in unicorns, "No, Harry and Shadow will be fine, they're probubly jsut chasing after him." Escortang Dally to the bedroom, Hiei sexed Dally a million times, to take her mind off the horribel thawt. Dally fell asleep, and Hiei went outside with Sasuke to the bushes and had sum moar gay sex, because Sasuke was really horny after herring Dally's moans. When they were done Hiei pulled up his black pants, his ass felling rlly saw.

Dally woek up, and could hear a distant groaning. She new it was silly Lupin and Tonks. Yourning, she streched and stood from her bed. Her hp was fully restoard, and now she was hungry. Shovelling the breakfast down her mouth, she foergot she was a vampier and like it a lot. Getting out her crystal balls, she looked into them, She was the best in the world at looking at balls. Everbody knew that, even the faggot Dumbie doore. Grazing pensivvely at the balls, she gasped. Inside the balls, she coud see Edwarg! "Edward, Edwarn are you okay?! Tawk to meh Edward! Do you have Harry and my baby?!" But Edward coud not heer her. Crying, she threw the big balls on the ground in distres. "I WANT MY BAAABAAAY!1!11!" Hiei herd her, and went inside to see wat was going rong. When he came into the cichen, he sore Dally slumped at the table, weeping. "Don't be in such Graet Dpression!" Hiei said, messajing her boobs. Grazing at his awesum anime eyes that were full of consern for her, Dally smiled, feeling betta. Hiei was so kind, so hansum, so jenerus and so sexy. Reeching up to kiss him, Dally glansed at the balls and shreeked. Shadow was in them! Mabee him and Harry wer in truble! Yousing te poweers to turn into a bat tiger cat thing, she flew off to where Dumbie doore and Miss Teek were hiding,the department stre where they sold Hollister's. Hiei ran after her, fallowed by Sasuke.

Dally and Heie made love everyday while the waited for hrry potter to come back with shadow. Hiei had gorwn to 7 inches fallsid and 12 inched with a bonner because of Ballys pussy jucie

Afterwards hiei gasped for breath ‘HUUUUUUU’ he circumcised but he saw saskue watching them by the doorport with his genes unzip.

‘what the scrotom are you doing??? dally questioned saske ran away into the forbinden forest but it was okay because dally was getting tumors with him.

‘o well he is a floppy donkey dick anyways’ Hiei angered ‘just like mataime’

Just them Link ran into the room ‘ I HAVE ANOTHER RITALIN’ he creamed. It read:

I have shadow and harry

If you want them back

Dally must ride a canary

- No One

'IT MUST BE FROM EDWARD! that fuckin hemorhoid sucker!' hiei exclaimined.

Dally was concieved. She didnt know how to ride a canary, but she would do anything to have her baby back.

" we should go back to professor skeletyons orifice. He might knpw where to find a canary" Link orferd.

"That’s an extortionist idea!” said Link “I think we should do it.”

The nest day Dally, Hiei and Link all went to Proffesor Skeleton office. Sasuke still wasn't back and Dally was beniging to get worrysome that something horny had happened to him.

"KNOCK NOCK NOCK' Bally knocked on the door. Prof. Skullington opened

"HEllo can I help?"

Link blarted. " we got anotyher ritalin about the KTFD and we need a canary to ride, do you have one?"

"Well I am not prostated but I am think that Proffesor Snaps has a canary" he knotted

"OH FUCK," Dally shouted. " we stole his dick" She did not know what to do. Snape was an enemy and was not best of terms with Dally but she needed canary bad.

"Could you hlp get the canery for us, skeleton?" Hiei asled

"No children I am afraid this is all the acres I can do," Prof. Skeleton said 'you must get the canary youresld'

So they left and souffled through the great hall to Snapes room. They snuck inside and snape was not there

"He must be looking for his dick," Dally said.

There were many pictures and darwings of Lily Ann Potter on the walls but then they found the Canary. It was yellow and orange like dumblydoors phenix but it was much bigger and more beautifull.

'Only one of you can ride the phenix,' Bella said. She was parked in the closet.

' I will go. The ritalin said it was me' Dally answered bravely. The powers were rushing in her organs. ' I will go and fight the good fight. link and Hiei must stay and find Sasuke.'

She hopped onto the canarh and it asked her were to go. She said to find shadow and the room turned colours; dally was in pain and sufferage but she knew it was for Shadow. She woke up and the canary was gone

Dally was uin a very dark room. it was cold and in the distance she could see a figure.

'SHADOW? HARRY? IS THAT YOURSELf?' she shouted, the figure turned but she could not see.

She began to walk but the figure kept moving far away. Dally was suddenly very tired and could not keep her eyes awake, so she fell asleep.

When Della awoken she saw the figure beside her.

'Edward?' she asked

He turned around. It was edwart he was holding baby Shadow, and he happy but did not say anything

'Were are mystique and that faggot dumbledore?'

'Away. I ran away, Dally. I took the baby and I ran.' he bent down and storked her hair. Dally was suprised and she pubed all over the place.

Sudenly, edward stood up and Dally could see that his eyes were a beautifull topaz that she has not seen before. He had on a exepersion of sufferage

He lunged at her foot and Dally screamed, but she did not feel a bite. She looked down at edwart and he was kneeled on with a small box in his palm. ' Ewdard...what are you doung?' Aksed Dally. She was confused, was he askeing her to be his fart?

Edward gulped. 'Dally, will you marry me?'

Edwart canned into the house that the house they Dally, Edwart, Shadow and heiei livd in that use to be hagerds house before they fixed it so it had everything. Harry bratwurst taken its baby of return bcuz they KFTD'd already, so were possible they a family still again and they where all sitting at the table to eat it.

Dally herd Edward cumming into the house and didn't no he was with Dumbledingdores side so she said with much happy '

"hey Edward!"

But Edwad was not so happy with Dally bcuz of whut she did with hiehi and she hthought he was she a slut and wanted to kill her like dumbledum say him to do.

He unforgot though that he was had to kill the baby instead of Hiei knew that Dally was in tribbles and kicked Edward in the facade and the balls.

Edward's examinations exploded and he punched Hiei is his eye and it went into his brains and kilt him.

"NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!1" Delly said with so much sorrority. "MY HUSSSSSBAAAAAAAAAND!"

Edward stop with a look of whore on his face. he just chilled his friend Hiedi! "Dalla it will be okay! I will be yore new husband!"

"Insurance!" Dally chimped and gave Edwart a big kiss.

So Shadow Dally and Edard livd happily ever after until one day...

There wasn't a knock on the doorbell. Dally and Edwarf came to get it out.

There was girl there. She had black hair and dark scary eyes like a teddy bear. Her face was in mean look.

"My name are Enoby Way," she said badly, "and I was Dumbledumdore's Boston."

((I decided not to write the end after all. O: And crossovers between FanFictions? Wut?

sorry it's so short, guize. ;-; ))

Woo hoo!
We need moar chapter 15s NOW.

oh guyis all these cheptars after so much days of deprivation is making me slightly erection

Bean Gay wrote:

oh guyis all these cheptars after so much days of deprivation is making me slightly erection

That is good.
You should make one too, yes?

Ritaly are you anmesia?! I have written one you said you like the child burping the cries dont you rememmber? sad

Bean Gay wrote:

Ritaly are you anmesia?! I have written one you said you like the child burping the cries dont you rememmber? sad

Who said you can only make one? ;D

oh. you know i actually wrote more than that that day i was having a creative leakage and the writing just oozed over and i writing more than i intended... i can post the bit that i circumcised out you interested?

I would love to hear it =D

After the uninfortunate encounter the coulple regot back by teleprostrating again. Hiei started kicking chairs and puncheing curtains. "WHY DID THAT FUCKEHR GRWAAARM" His angers was a mountain. He felt penetrated with furry.
"CLAM DOWN" Dally put hiei in order, "Our anger is whalt they want we must be reverse psychologicals"
Hiei reduced his orcish behayviaour but he still angeried inside. "How are we gonna do now??! He got howr baby and god knows what he will input on him"
Dally didnt know what to do but she had faith in er baby, she knew he was strong he was the chosen one so he grew up fast he was already level 23.
Just then a kncock knock interrupted Dally's thought express. She ran to the door maybe it's an urgency.
When she opened at beginning she didnt saw anyhting but then she lookd down she saw a mushrom.
"Hello? you..." she started but with self defense
"Hi my name is Toad" said the mushroome, xcept now that dally looked better it not really a mushrum more like a boy with a hat that is shaped like a some kinda fungia.
"What is the purpouse of yor cummings? " she asked as want to know
"I am for seel informations, i know you are in look for it i am here to give... for a price"
"What price?!" Hiei had joinede in the conversatian.
"221319871084718971841723084917814710847 wizard gold magic coinees"
"WHAT" hiei was a bomberman "221319871084718971841723084917814710847 wizard gold magic coinys??? We could buy a whole football team of hyppogrifs withat"
"When i give information it causes me to death that why i ask for this immunse payerments"
"Ok" said hiei he planned on making dally turn into a bag of 221319871084718971841723084917814710847 moneys and then have her a runner.
"let me in he said the toad" and he allowed himself in
he jumped on top of the table so that his level was the same as the heads and aksed: "what is the information of your looking?"
"we wanna know where edward taken our baby to?" hiei and dally started trembling in expects.
"the baby is in another castle" said the frog and then he popped like a zit that had been pooped.
"WHAT GIVE US MORE SPECIFICS" yalled Hiet to the dead toadstool but no answer from himcuz dead.

Hah. I believes you has a talent for writing Dallyish