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PostSubject: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeWed Sep 30, 2009 8:43 pm

I am a professional writer, and I read your fanfic and I thought it was a joke. It had an okay plot, but there was so much crappy stuff that distracts the reader from it. I am not trying to flame you, but I must inform you that this fanfiction is known for being one of the worst fanfictions. I am more than willing to help you turn FaCe ThE StRaNgE into an amazing work of literary art.

If you would like me to assist you in a new version of this fanfiction, please message me.
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PostSubject: Re: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeThu Oct 01, 2009 12:26 pm

WHY ARE YOU ALL THE SAME? WHY YOU ALL TRYING TO SQUEAZE FTS INTO YOUR MODELS OF GOOD LITERATURE. WHY IS IT WHEN SOMETHING IS DIFFRENT EVERYONE TRIES TO PUSH IT INTO THE NORMAL? WE LOVE FTS AS IT IS, AND ITS NOT CHANGING NEVER!
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PostSubject: Re: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeThu Oct 01, 2009 7:07 pm

Bean Gay wrote:
WHY ARE YOU ALL THE SAME? WHY YOU ALL TRYING TO SQUEAZE FTS INTO YOUR MODELS OF GOOD LITERATURE. WHY IS IT WHEN SOMETHING IS DIFFRENT EVERYONE TRIES TO PUSH IT INTO THE NORMAL? WE LOVE FTS AS IT IS, AND ITS NOT CHANGING NEVER!

What the white guy says ^
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PostSubject: Re: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeThu Oct 01, 2009 7:44 pm

The beauty in FTS is because its not perfect. Damn what the hell is wrong with you children. /:
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PostSubject: Re: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeSat Oct 03, 2009 12:01 pm

WTF IS WRONG WIT U! G2HELL!!! Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeSat Oct 03, 2009 2:41 pm

Link wrote:
The beauty in FTS is because its not perfect. Damn what the hell is wrong with you children. /:
thats what i thought!
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she mispelld animation on her profile Evil or Very Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeSat Oct 03, 2009 11:06 pm

Bean Gay wrote:
she mispelld animation on her profile Evil or Very Mad

I'll grab the pitchfork.
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PostSubject: Re: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeFri Dec 11, 2009 9:36 am

Why would anyone try to change this work of literary genius? We can obviously see the artistic value of her typos and misuse of words. Dally is a genius in such a way that not even she can comprehend what she was written. She has gone above conventional literary elements. She is above the plot, the climax, characters, rising action, and even humor. She is at the pinnacle of her writing career and you need to let her genius ooze into the world like an alligator.
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PostSubject: Re: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeFri Dec 11, 2009 3:30 pm

YEAH, WHAT EVERYONE ELSE SAID.
WE LOVE DALLY THE WAY SHE IS!
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PostSubject: Re: Just a suggestion...   Just a suggestion... Icon_minitimeThu Jan 28, 2010 11:09 am

ok, I'm a bit of a writer myself, but I havve to agree with everyone else. Not anyone can drag 8 different stories into a piece of literature that you can't stop reading for any number of reasons. It takes a lot to create inside jokes between friends about tumors. tumors. the friend of mine who originally brought me to this website almost killed our other friend for trying to tell Dally off for the spelling, but that just makes it more worth it.

let us all keep reading for the sake of enjoyment and let Dally enjoy her 15 minutes.
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