WHAT THE HELL IS THIS SHIT?!?

i have never read something so.... retarded. i cannot even begin to count the spelling errors and grammar mistakes. it's a disgrace to the writing community. i laugh in your faces, retards who love this story as if it was the bible. it was a piece of shit and shouldn't even be regarded as a story. i will give it one thing though: it was hilarious as fuck. i have never laughed so hard in my life, and i only laugh more when i find out that people ACTUALLY LIKE THIS STUFF AS IF IT WAS A PIECE OF LITERATURE. Please Dally, for the love of god, either read a dictionary, or continue your pathetic journey to becoming the worst writer in the world. i only encourage you to continue writing so i can laugh at you. ^ ^ bash me all you want, this is the truth and if you can't accept it, then well... you're as stupid as the girl who wrote this pitiful garbage. ^_^

FUCK YOU! ur the extremely stupid 1........

Obvious troll is obvious.

Nice try though, I haven't seen anyone employ the tactic of falsified superiority for some time.

Maybe you should just go back to fapping it to Sailor Moon hentai in your parents' basement though. I think you're probably way better at that, considering all the years of experience you've had.

Finally, someone on this site with sense.

I only created an account on this site because someone needs to smack some sense into Dally (aka Delly, or maybe that was just a misspelling.). I've seen better looking stories from a squealing 16-year-old fangirl who hates gays (or, as Jack SKELLINGTON (SEE THIS? THIS IS HIS REAL NAME!!!) calls them, gay beans) than this. Hell, one of my friends happens to be one of them, and her stories are okay. I've even written better stories than this, and I'm 14 years old.

And yes, I may be trolling, but seeing a shit story get this popular, this site needs some trolls.

Jak Attack wrote:

Finally, someone on this site with sense.

I only created an account on this site because someone needs to smack some sense into Dally (aka Delly, or maybe that was just a misspelling.). I've seen better looking stories from a squealing 16-year-old fangirl who hates gays (or, as Jack SKELLINGTON (SEE THIS? THIS IS HIS REAL NAME!!!) calls them, gay beans) than this. Hell, one of my friends happens to be one of them, and her stories are okay. I've even written better stories than this, and I'm 14 years old.

And yes, I may be trolling, but seeing a shit story get this popular, this site needs some trolls.

i sant u a pm 2

Jak Attack wrote:

Finally, someone on this site with sense.

I only created an account on this site because someone needs to smack some sense into Dally (aka Delly, or maybe that was just a misspelling.). I've seen better looking stories from a squealing 16-year-old fangirl who hates gays (or, as Jack SKELLINGTON (SEE THIS? THIS IS HIS REAL NAME!!!) calls them, gay beans) than this. Hell, one of my friends happens to be one of them, and her stories are okay. I've even written better stories than this, and I'm 14 years old.

And yes, I may be trolling, but seeing a shit story get this popular, this site needs some trolls.

wow its been 3 years and ur still a fag wow omg Lmao